10.20.2004

"if you HURT my friend, again..."

I SWEAR, I'll KILL YOU...

: p I snipped ENDLESS CHAIN again (section 02 pretty much) , to streamline the story... I think this is how I want the story to progress this "early on".. More hatable Ralf : } and less flashbacks.. one added scene, which I came up with. It's been a while since I've come up with a new twist in a story and I think I like it. (tho the title AMERICAN DOGFIGHTER might change.. but maybe not...)

Oyasumi...

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